Non-finite clauses rhetoric impact

Non-finite clause type

Example

Grammatical role

What is packaged?

Rhetorical effect on the reader

Infinitival clause

To leave now would be a mistake.

Subject

Action/proposition

Encourages the reader to consider the action as an abstract possibility or policy choice.

Infinitival clause

Her goal is to win.

Predicative complement

Intended action

Presents the action as a purpose, objective, or future outcome.

Infinitival clause

I want to leave.

Complement

Desired action

Directs attention to intention, desire, or potential action.

Infinitival clause (purpose)

She left early to catch the train.

Adjunct

Purpose

Explains motivation efficiently and naturally.

Gerund-participial clause

Swimming is healthy.

Subject

Activity

Treats an activity as a general concept or category.

Gerund-participial clause

I enjoy swimming.

Complement

Activity

Presents the activity as an object of attitude or evaluation.

Gerund-participial clause

Ben’s leaving surprised us.

Subject

Event

Reifies the event, allowing it to be discussed as a thing.

Gerund-participial clause

After leaving the office, she went home.

Adjunct

Prior event

Compresses background information and improves flow.

Past-participial clause

Defeated by the storm, the expedition returned home.

Adjunct

Resulting state

Highlights circumstances or consequences without a separate clause.

Past-participial clause

The documents submitted yesterday are complete.

Modifier

State/result

Efficiently adds descriptive information.

Bare infinitival clause

I saw him leave.

Complement

Whole event

Presents the event as directly perceived and complete.

Gerund-participial clause (perception)

I saw him leaving.

Complement

Ongoing event

Presents the event from the inside, as unfolding.

Verbless (with comparison to alternatives):

Example

Verbless?

Focus / rhetorical impact

He’d been there without anyone noticing him.

Presents an accompanying event; more explicit and process-oriented.

He was sunbathing without any sunscreen on.

Presents an accompanying state or condition; more compressed and immediate.

While I was working in Rome, I lived with them.

Presents a full background event with explicit time and viewpoint.

While working in Rome, I lived with them.

Presents the background activity more compactly and integrates it with the main event.

While in Rome, I lived with them.

Presents only the relevant setting or state; highly compressed and backgrounded.

Just imagine — our son being a doctor!

Presents the situation as an imagined state of affairs; more event-like.

Just imagine — our son a doctor!

Presents the imagined state directly and vividly; more immediate and emphatic.

See also

Infinitivals