Cheatsheet¶
Semantic patterns¶
Inference → Fact → Conclusion /Reason / Result / Action-Result
Contrast → Then vs. Now / Although / Despite / Partial Concession
Reasoning → All but / Unlike / Also
Time → Before / Now / At this moment
Condition → Given / Even if / Participial clause
Process → Begins / Underway / Can be undone
Effect → Makes / Leads to
Prediction → Long-term / Casual
Organization → Ranked ideas / Action series (modal + verbs)
Sentence qualities¶
Crisp → fast, clear, easy, effective. Clarity and readability. Feels lighter.
Tight → precise, controlled, dense, economical. Precision and efficiency
Elegant → polished, smooth, sophisticated, flow, graceful. Grace, sophistication, or aesthetic pleasure
Pro strategy: Combine them when possible. A sentence can be crisp, tight, and elegant — sharp, efficient, and polished all at once.
Rhetorical effect of style¶
Strong rhetoric → Persuasive, Argumentative, Critical
Moderate rhetoric → Deliberative, Comparative, Interpretive
Light rhetoric → Speculative, Discursive
Low rhetoric (by default) → Expository, Analytical, Descriptive, Narrative, Reflective
Rhythmic variety¶
Every sentence makes a point. Too many short sentences overwhelm the reader with constant points, while too many long sentences increase the effort required to reach each one. A good paragraph balances the two.
Syntactic Variety: Using different sentence lengths to keep the reader engaged.
Pacing: The speed at which the reader consumes the information.
The “Punchy” Conclusion: Using a short sentence at the end of a long paragraph to summarize the point.
Edit¶
Main point is either in the start or the end of the sentence
Words between the subject and the verb.
Topic prominence
A single thought per sentence.
Thoughts are linked
Where does the main emphasis fall?
What part carries the emphasis?
Cognitive load
What is important? What draws attention?
Can you bolster the point of the sentence?
Unnecessarily busy?
Main info should not be slipped as background: not in subordinates, not in adjuncts
Redundant info?
Specifics: Any occurrence of more than one word for a single lexeme (openly disregard → flouting)
Specific NP (users → readers)
Adv + verb → specific verb: show clearly → demonstrate, go on → continue
General verb + abstract noun → precise verb. Typically make/do/have/take/give/get specific: make decision → decide
Stranding
Dangling modifier
Keeping the Anchor (the start) lean and simple, the Punchline (the end) carries all the power.
Info package: Balanced, theme feels proper, strong subject, easy to grasp and follow topic, correct Theme/Subject/Topic
Paragraph cohesion, “Baton”. No gaps.
Information package¶
Device |
Marked Form (a) |
Unmarked / Basic Form (b) |
|---|---|---|
Preposing |
This one you can keep. |
You can keep this one. |
Postposing |
I’ve lent to Jill the only copy that has been corrected. |
I’ve lent the only copy that has been corrected to Jill. |
Inversion |
In the bag was a gold watch. |
A gold watch was in the bag. |
Passive |
The car was driven by Sue. |
Sue drove the car. |
Existential |
There was a doctor on board. |
A doctor was on board. |
Extraposition |
It’s clear that she is ill. |
That she is ill is clear. |
Cleft |
It was Kim that suggested it. |
Kim suggested it. |
Pseudo-cleft |
What I need is a cold drink. |
I need a cold drink. |
Dislocation |
It’s excellent, this curry. |
This curry is excellent. |